final project thoughts

After the workshop we did on Wednesday im feeling ok about how my draft is going. The summary of my thesis was accurate which lets me know im at least on the right track. The thesis was basically what was in my head. The only difference was the wording was a little bit different. My paper isnt very balanced between research and analysis at all. Since it’s the rough draft I haven’t added as much to research side as I should. Most of the paper is analysis so far but I do have some research added in. My classmate just recommended that I stay on the same track but just polish it more for the final paper (obviously). My next step from here is just to continue writing and do a little more research. Im still not sure I like where my paper is going but I guess ill have to see. My bibliography was lacking some information so my next step is to do more research because I don’t feel like I have enough material to write about. Another thing im slightly concerned about is that I don’t really like what im writing. Im only writing about this topic because I feel like there is more to write about it. I feel like I should write about what my actual opinion is because it would motivate me more to make my paper better. Maybe my next step is to try and find more information on my actual point of view so I can start over and write about something that is actually my point of view. Hopefully I am able to get everything figured out and I can turn in a quality paper that i am happy with.

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