Reading out loud worksop

The workshop on Monday helped me out a lot. Since we were doing a new method of work shopping, this workshop was a little more useful. Reading my paper out loud helped me find small grammatical errors and also helped me make my sentences flow better. My partner was also finding out he had grammatical errors when he read his out loud. After the workshop I decided to change a few things. The biggest thing that I’ve decided to change is my conclusion. My partner said it was a little repetitive and I agree with him. Working with someone that had a similar topic was actually very helpful. Since our topics were similar we were able to share ideas on how to organize the essay and it was extremely helpful.  In my partners paper he presented a problem similar to mine. He then offered a proposal to fix the problem, which I found to be a very good addition to his paper. After reading his solution I actually plan on doing the same. After this workshop I have a lot more ideas on where to get sources. Since I’m writing about reddit there isn’t much information to go off of. After the workshop I realized that I can find other sources the correlate to my topic to help me prove my point. Now that I think about it our papers were very similar. My partner was arguing that a certain part of the Internet called the “deep web” should be more censored or not made available to the general public. My paper was about censorship and moderation on a website called reddit. Both of our topics are basically talking about censorship so it was very easy to read each others papers and get ideas from each other.

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